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“The Truth Commission”
Introduction and Welcome
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Screen Play Written, Produced and Directed by
David W Coon
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Disclaimer:
This is a screenplay for promotion of the Truth Commission. This play is a work of fiction. All of the event are completely fictional and are not real. The history is based on events that have not happened (yet). No names and companies that are mentioned in this play are the same as the ones in real life, and any similarities are completely random.
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PUBLIC NOTICE
Please note: this is a work in progress.
So far I have only completed Act 1, and 2. There is still alot of work to do before I call this screenplay complete. This play is part of a bigger picture. All scene are still in need of revision and editing.
IF you have web surfed to this page, please stay and enjoy the show. It is fate that you have discovered this.All comments are welcome. Please give me feedback on this play. If you are going to attack my political ideology, bring it on, but only if you take the time to read the entire thing. I have incorporated every criticism that I have ever got into the story line. So before you say that
"all leaders become corrupt eventually, even you would become corrupt if you got to much power" <-- Stupid criticism because i clearly offer a solution to this problem However, if you have something intelligent to say, please, I have a response for you.
Thank you and enjoy the production. I am working very hard on this and i am going to have the entire thing done by the end of January.
I want to thank IdeaGuy for this insightful comments.__________________________________________
C O L O R S Y S T E M
Reading online is almost better then reading a book these days. I for one, love reading and writing in a downward direction without have to turn that pages. (omg, you know you are from a completely different generation and age when scolling down is more common to you then turning a page)
Without pages to organize writing into, colors are used instead.
With that said, I like using color to organize my writing, and so these are the meanings of the colors.
Red is Scene Prompts, or anything wait to grab your attention with, it is also the voice of Jack
Also Act 1 Act 2 Act 5
Teal is for Scenes Names and numbers
(Purple is for scene directions and character actions)
(Dark Purple is for Time)
You will also notice other colors too. These are supposed to represenet values and other useful stuff.
Yellow is for anouncements
Dark green is for money. this play measures money from $0.09 to $700,000,000,000.00
Green is for education, anything writen in green is educational
Orange is for Universal Enlightenment and Alignment, or anything good
Dark Red is for Evil
Dark Blue is for really dramtic writting...
Act 3 Act 4
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Introduction
Welcome to the show
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I encourage you to read this entire play, or wait to see it on the screen. If you read it now, you will be given more of the plot, so you can follow along better. For those of you who want to wait to see it in film, might want to wait and read the screenplay after they see the movie, as to not spoil the storyline.
This play is long. It is about 60 typed pages or so. It takes about 45 minutes - 2 hours to read, depending on your reading speed. It is a play, so most of it is dialoge, so it read pretty quickly. Hit F 11 or full screen and sit back, relax, get ready to scroll down and enjoy the show (now or wait for it on the big screen)
Abstract
Experience what The Great War was like directly from the people that were there. Listen to them describe in the utmost detail, how the war started, how we almost were completely wiped out and what society is like after it was all over. So sit back, relax, and enjoy the show. This play will horrifie you!!
(Don’t be afraid, there is a happy ending, kind of)
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Cast
Please allow us to introduce to you,
the Star of our Play,
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General "Justice" Jericho
The star of our play, the man that led the people to victory in the war for equality for everyone. The General is the representation of Justice. He stands for all that is good, and is willing to fight for what is right. He could no longer ideally sit back and allow such tremendous inequality in the world. He had to do something. His strong Utilitarian views of the greatest good for the greatest number have given the majority the strength to stand up and fight. He led the people to say “we’re not going to take it!”
While his opinion of complete Utilitarianism is often not shared with his counter part Charity, he is an important part in the balance of the universe. Justice always prevails. The General is now a national hero. Without his bravery, we all would have perished.
Nicknames: The General,
And co-staring
Charity "Balance" Peace
Charity is like an angel. She is the balance in the force. Charity is the peace and kindness that has saved us all. After the war, it was with her guidance that we were able to finally bring peace and equality to the world. She represents everything that is good, fair and just. She is never evil, never vain and never rash. She is always calm and brave. Is is also very beautiful.
Charity was nominated as President of the People after the war. She has given absolute power to ensure the distribution of equality. She was chosen because she is so pure, so honest and fair, that she might be the only one that will never become corrupted by power.
Nicknames: Peace, Fairness, Kindness
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That is all that you need to know to get started on the first act. I remecomment that you read about each scene know, you get a basic understand of what is going on, and when you are going to know about certain plot element. If you are the kind of person that just likes to read into the unknown, continue onto Act 1 now. Or if you would like to have some idea before jumping right into the story, read the introduction for each Act and Scene now. This is give you a sence of the Time Line and order of events.
After the scene introductions, is the Meet and Greet of the rest of the Cast.
The Truth Commission Act and scene Index
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Act 1
"A brief History of the Future War"
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(Time and Setting) After The Great War
The year is 2010, only a few months have passed since the end of the Great War.
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Scene 1
"Interview with Justice"
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Jack interviews General Justice. Justice tells us his story of The Great War. Justice tells us how it started, what went wrong and how the people were on the brink of losing.
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Scene 2
"Justice meets Charity"
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The General discusses the morality of the war with his life long counterpart, Charity. Justice argues that the remaining war criminals should be put to death for their crimes. Charity offers another solution.
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Scene 3
"The Truth Commission is Founded"
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short scene, no acting
Flash back to December 19, 2006 . The day that the Truth Commission was founded.
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Scene 4
"Interview with Greedy Capitalist"
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Avarice reveals the other side of the story. He gives us the Capitalist’s point of view on The Great War. He explains why we had no right to start a war in the first place. It was their money. They had earned it fair and square. He justifies the deaths of hundreds millions of people by telling us that the Elites were chosen by God because they are better then everyone else.
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Scene 5
"Today's Worker Interview"
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Interview with Joe. He talks about what life was like for the average working person before and after the war. He compares how people spent their work life and social life. He tells us that by removing money as the object of society, people changed for the better. They became more friendly and society prospered as a whole.
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Scene 6
"DW Coon talks with a business partner"
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DW Coon talks with Zeal about what it takes to be the perfect business partner. DW explains that if everyone takes action now, and fixes the problem for it happens, then that is the cheapest, fastest, easiest way to solve the potential problem that was forming. DW was one of the first people to foresee the inevitable war. If he only could have reached more people. DW tried to prevent the war by forming a massive public company that rivaled the Elites. Unfortunately, the war was inevitable because the Elites had been preparing for it for decades.
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Act 2
"The Truth of Inequality and
Reconciliation Commission
of the Working People of the World"
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(Time and Setting) Before the Great War
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Scene 1
"The Public Announcement"
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Scene 2
"How did it come to this?"
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This scene describes what the world looked like in early 2007. The scene starts out with ‘the opening announcement’. This statement is contents of everything that is to be covered in The Committee Meeting. Flash back to the now famous lecture given to a Globalization class at SUNY Albany in early 2006. The professor explains what the problem is and what has to be done about it.
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Scene 3
"The Committee Meeting"
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The start of the meeting. This is where the commission official announces to the public their objectives and findings.
The first speaker of the night is General Justice. He has been asked to prepare a statement explaining the current situation.
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Scene 4
"Inequality report"
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In this scene, DW Coon tells Jack about the Inequality Report. DW pleads with the Elites not to start a war. He begs that a peaceful resolutions to the problems at hand. There is another way to bring equality and balance to the world, other then war.
(In the office of DW Coon)
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Scene 5
"Official Statement of Purpose"
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The General reads the Official Statement of purpose that was sent to the Elites. This is like the Olive Branch Treaty sent to King George by the founding fathers of the
- Declaration of Independence of the United States and the
- Universal Declaration of Human Rights as adopted by the
- United Nations General Assembly.
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Scene 6
"Declaration of War"
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Justice lively declares war on the Elites. Justice has been made the official spooks person of the people’s Revolution of Equality. He is also officially put in charge of the workforce (later becomes the Bloody Revolutionary army. He provides complete proof and rational for the decision made by the people.
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Scene7
"What is Wealth and the Basic Standard of Living"
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This act tells of the BSoL Act and the definition of wealth.
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Scene 8
"Note on Christmas Day"
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Scene 9
"Targets”
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This scene outlines all of the people that suspects of crimes against humanity and the crime of supporting inequality. The major
Act 3
The Truth Commission
"The Evils of Capitalism"
This Act provides more evidence of the evils of capitalism. Scene 1 vividly destribes what happends when you have millions of people that relay of a complex system of commerce, and you take away one element, gasoline, and you get to see how it turns out.
Scene 2 talks about how the capitalists control the law, by looking at an example. Then we see how poverty effects the lives of children. How is it morally ok to allow children to starve? We then talk about the enivroment, and then close with a disscussion of what truth is.
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Scene 1
"The Riots"
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Scene 2
"The Law of the Elites"
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"How did the Elites control everything? They did not make the law, did they?
Lets take a look at an example of a law. Who's interest do you think this law serves? The people, the government, of the Capitalist?"
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Scene 3
"Save the Children!"
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November 7, 2005
Children are not any one racial or ethnic group, they are the future of our world, however there are lots of children that don’t have very good chances at even making it to becoming adults. There are hundreds of millions of children in poverty and something needs to be done about it.
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Scene 4
"The fate of the earth: can we preserve the global environment?"
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(Based on Rachel Carson The Obligation to Endure)
“The history of the life on earth has been a history of interaction between living things and their surroundings.” In the modern global world, we as humans have the obligation to take care of our planet. We are supposedly the first intelligent species, I say why don't we act like it. Keck the Jerks that think it is ok to pollute out of power, and lets start doing something today."
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Scene 5
"What is Truth?"
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Nietzsche argues that truth is just something that the human intellect can never understand completely. So we make up our own truth from our experiences and that’s what we believe. Truth is totally relative to each individual and what information that individual has. What ever one self believes whole heartedly to be truth, unless otherwise proven to be false, is what is truth for that person. This is not just true for individuals, but for societies as a whole.
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Act 4
"Completing The Cycle"
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This Act compares this worker's revolution to other historic revolutions where the mode of production was change to the majority pick. So far, we have had 3 major changes.
Mode of Production | Classes |
Slavery | Masters- Slaves |
Feudalism | Lord- Peasants |
Capitalism | Capitalist- Worker |
Socialism (prediction) | No classes |
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"Karl Marx"
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There has always been a class struggle between those who do the work and those who benefit from the work.
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"The Founding of the Bureauracy"
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Weber said that the world is becoming less traditional and more bureaucratic. Traditional authority is a system in which people do what they do because that’s the way it’s always been done. In bureaucratic societies, people follow the rules because those are the rules.
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"The Death Penalty"
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"Liberty"
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"To the Human resource Department at REG Inc"
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July 31st 2005
To The Human Resources Department,
To Whom It May Concern:I, David Coon, am presenting to you my statement of appeal. I have submitted a prior appeal to the
Regal Cinema 18 management staff and it proved unsuccessful.
End of Act 4
Act 5
"The Great War"
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(Time and Setting)After The Great War.
This act takes place shortly after the war. Watch flash back sceens and other exciting moments and see how it all ended. This is the final act.
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"The Founding Father of Equality"
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(Flashback to Summer 2007) A personal note read by DW, addressing the Elites. This is only a few days after the Majority ruled them guilty in the Online Trial. They have been proven guilty of crimes against humanity, as fully detailed in The Inequality Report. DW gives one last warning before full-scale civil war takes over.
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"The War for Equality"
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(Fall 2007 – Spring 2010), This scene vividly describes the individual battles of the war. It covers the invasion of the Long Island Fortress and the crumbling of the California Fortress. Also recaps the horrors of the war on the working people.
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"The Final Battle"
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The final battle took place on Christmas Eve, 2009, only 3 years after the founding father wrote his plea. The People's Army had finally over run both the West Coast Fort and The Long Island Fortress. All that was left was the main Elite Fortress in
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Introducing the rest of the cast.
Professor Diligence
"The Teacher"
Professor Diligence was the first great mind to take advantage of the Age of Information. He is the Einstein of the 21st century. He has collaborated with the Truth Commission for the publication of The Inequality Report. The Professor represents all the knowledge and wisdom that society needs to obtain the highest degree of freedom the world has ever seen.
Nicknames: Dilan, Professor D, PD
Zeal is the Ideal Partner Professor Diligence's son. The idea partner is anyone that believes in these values. Justice, Freedom and Equality. Anyone, does not matter who you are, if you believe in this, then you are the perfect candidate for the job. What job you ask? The job of being a productive member in society. All you have to do is something that helps the world in some way. This includes washing dishes or being a NASA scientist. But you have to be doing something.
Nicknames: Integrity, hard working
Avarice
Greedy Capitalist "Evil"
Avarice is the representation of Evil. He was the driving force behind ever truly evil dick, I'm sorry i mean dictator that world has ever seen. He gave Hitler power to nearly take over the world. He has also been know to work with Saddam Hussein and George W Bush. He is a evil man.
Nicknames: Satan, All that is Evil, Vlad
Then and Now
Today's Wage Worker, represents the The working people. This character has two counter parts. One that is the wage worker before the war. And the other is the profit worker from the Era of Equality. This character is who the war for fought for. He did not want to start a war, they just no other choice. He had to do something.
Nicknames: Temperance, self-restraint
DW Coon
Founding Father of EqualityThe DW Anthology is the first of the 'new wave of information'. Fueled by the wealth of information in this new age of computers, DW complied the true democratic opinion of the people. The report was the complete work of the working people. Completely written by the people, for the people.
Nicknames: Y2J, Founding Father of Equality
We are Proud to present, the true star of our play...
Jack is the narrator of our play. He represents you. He asks the questions that you want to know the answers too. Jack is not even a real person. He is a computer program. He has read everything that has ever been written on the Internet. He is the collective voice of all of us. He is the good and bad of every single person that has ever interacted with the Internet. It's funny, because we have all know him all of our lives (or since the creation of the Internet), and yet most people don't even know his name.
Nicknames: You, them, US, us, the people, the worker, the government
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Now that you have met everyone, let the show begin.
Please continue on to ACT 1
For more infomation about the Author and the free eBook,
please see the Afterwards
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Enjoy the Show!
(c) 2007 David W Coon
Part of The DW Anthology, a free eBook